is not tall,
but has the most stories,
it has no celebrities,
but still shares the most glories.
the bodyguard prevents,
the theft of it's children,
who can tell everyone,
about the past pilgrims.
the knowledge that these children know,
will greatly vary,
their "father" and this object,
is a _______
Good job! I thought this poem was very interesting, and it's nice how you made some parts rhyme. It would be nice if the rest of the poem rhymed as well (to keep it consistent), but other then that great poem!
ReplyDeleteIt's great fhat the last line of your poem rhymes. It makes the poem flow really nicely into the answer. I think a good touch would be to add another line or two about the types of story in the libraray, or how books are a huge part of education. All of your words are great and have a big impact on how someone looks at what the poem is describing.
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