A very good poem indeed! Although the answer may seem obvious, I like the way you described the object, and some of the lines are thought provoking like "...producing beautiful lines...". You made an everyday object sound very special! Good work!
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A very good poem indeed! Although the answer may seem obvious, I like the way you described the object, and some of the lines are thought provoking like "...producing beautiful lines...". You made an everyday object sound very special! Good work!
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